Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is: Football can give positive effects to the society and that's why we should encourage people to play it.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone knows that sports can give positive impacts to students. They know that energetic exercise can make our brain more active. Also, people know that sprots stars are holding charity match.

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

 

http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/organisation/mission.html -
This source is interesting but more of a general source than of concrete sources. So, I need to find more concrete sources like statistics or campaign that FIFA is doing now through football.
http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/socialresponsibility/news/newsid=2456567/index.html -
This source is good for concrete sources when I write about the equality. I can make my grounds stronger throught this speech.

http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/socialresponsibility/news/newsid=2435366/index.html -
This source is very good for various kind of my opinions. I can use first note to the medical part and second note for discrimination part. I will us this effectively in my essay.
 

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

Football can give positive impacts to society and this is undoubtedly true. If I'm right, we should make people to play football more to have benefits like health. Also, we should make football be dynamized to affect good impacts. But if people ignore me, it would be the problem of basic life. If one even has no ability to live normally like insufficient of water or no home, one will pay attention to other basic things which are more related to lives.

My Narration

   Even though it has became less, still some people think sports, especially football is dangerous for children, so it is bad for them. It is true that playing football can be dangerous as it is one of the wildest sports and some children get hurts while they are playing it. However, this is unnecessary worries because the rate of children who get hurts are not that much and we have many other positive things that we can achieve by football.

 

  Even in our daily life, we can find out that football is also giving positive effects to the society. When we see SNS like facebook of instagram, we can figure out that many sports stars are trying to advertise campaigns like charity match or events. These days, SNS is one of the best way to communicate with global people and we can know that when we see some famous companies' marketing methods. For example, when we see Arsenal's player Jack wilshere's instagram, we can see many good campaigns are held. If these famous players keep advertising various kinds of good events and campaigns, more people will attend to those.

 

  Also, this is general idea but we can have healthy body if we play football. It is undoubtedly sure that if we exercise regularly, our health problem would become less. Some people worry about the injury, but that is just the process of keeping good shape of body. If we do not exercise properly, health problem would become more severe and I think this result is not desired by everybody. Do you want to be unhealthy just because you worry that you or your children can have injury? I don't think it is wise selection.

 

  Moreover, football can be the factor that makes world peace by insisting no discrimination of any form. If football stars play football under the slogan of no discrimination and peaceful world, children would be educated peacefully with their role models. I think all people will know that education is the most important process of children. Then, this situation is not impossible. If this happen, world peace will be easy because children have been educated with these factors and become adults. We can achieve the humanity's dream.