1) My argument
I want to argue about the effects of football. I think football can give various positive effects to the society. It can be the aspects of health, human relationship, and so on. If we struggle to develop the effects of football, we can expand to many other parts.
2) How I found my argument
My first research question was, what are positive effects that sports can give society. With the investigation, I could find tons of effects that sports give to the society with affirmative. Theses articles helped me to write lots of backing informations. Also, while I kept researching about this topic, I realized that many pedagogists agree that sports can give positive impacts to youth by making their body and also mental advantages. By this information, I could make my body stronger.
3) New research questions
I have several questions that need to be resolved.
a) What kinds of effect that football can give to the society?
b) What are negative effects of football?
c) How can we maximize the effectiveness of football?
d) How many people can receive positive effects by football?
4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler How is your argument connected to the Harvard Sampler? ANY CONNECTION IS VALID. Please focus on choosing a good argument first, then think about how it is related to the Harvard Sampler. I will help you think of the connection if necessary.
This argument has many connections to the Harvard Sampler. First, it obviously is directly related to the human mind. Second, it connects to medical detectives because there are lots of medical questions about the physical nature of our brain. It also relates to evolution because I can address how the power of the brain is what led to humans being the dominant species on the planet. Last, the internet is the most powerful product and playground of modern computing, so when comparing the mind to computers I will need to look at the mind versus the internet.
2014년 9월 25일 목요일
Week 2 objectives
What is my current topic?
I want to write about football as I want to be a football manager or board of the club.
What are my guiding questions?
The positive effect of the football, How to give positive effect to the society, What are the methods to succeed as a football manager.
What are my current thoughts?
Already, people who are related to football give several positive impacts to the society.
What is the opposition?
Opponents will say that food, habitat, and clothes problem is more important than the positive effect of football. Also, they will say that football is dangerous and it it only a play.
I want to write about football as I want to be a football manager or board of the club.
What are my guiding questions?
The positive effect of the football, How to give positive effect to the society, What are the methods to succeed as a football manager.
What are my current thoughts?
Already, people who are related to football give several positive impacts to the society.
What is the opposition?
Opponents will say that food, habitat, and clothes problem is more important than the positive effect of football. Also, they will say that football is dangerous and it it only a play.
2014년 9월 18일 목요일
Body (not complete)
Football can give positive impacts to the society and that's why we should promote football to make better society.
1. Famous football star can induce public to participate in meaningful campaign.
2. By playing football, children can have better personality like cooperation and patience. Also, their health problem will be better if they play the football regularly.
3. Supporters from each football team can learn desirable competition by supporting in the unit of fan club.
Have you ever watch football game in the stadium? I mean, not American football, British football. It is often called 'soccer' but I will call it 'Football' because it is originally from UK. But, except this name, football has another name; 'The small society'. It is sure that many sports are called as a small society because they have various factors that are needed in the society like people and rules. So, it is possible that sports give huge impacts to the real society positively. To give you one example, Federation Internationale de Football Association, so called FIFA, suggested some solutions about many problems in our society which are possible for advancement of our society. There suggested resolutions were related to racism and discrimination about the people, health, ethics and so on. We can notice that the head institution related to football have tried hard to make our society better. If we take those resolutions and adapt them to our society, many advantages will occur.
First, If famous football stars induce public to participate in meaningful campaign, the effectiveness will surely be huge.
Have you ever watch football game in the stadium? I mean, not American football, British football. It is often called 'soccer' but I will call it 'Football' because it is originally from UK. But, except this name, football has another name; 'The small society'. It is sure that many sports are called as a small society because they have various factors that are needed in the society like people and rules. So, it is possible that sports give huge impacts to the real society positively. To give you one example, Federation Internationale de Football Association, so called FIFA, suggested some solutions about many problems in our society which are possible for advancement of our society. There suggested resolutions were related to racism and discrimination about the people, health, ethics and so on. We can notice that the head institution related to football have tried hard to make our society better. If we take those resolutions and adapt them to our society, many advantages will occur.
First, If famous football stars induce public to participate in meaningful campaign, the effectiveness will surely be huge.
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