Cause football can give positive impacts to the society, we should encourage football.
2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
I am using expert interview, real examples, and some related facts.
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
Actually, it is hard to find emotional part of my essay. However, I think this is not totally good, because sometimes, emotional things are more powerful than logical things. I think I would better to add some emotional factors in my essay.
My Confirmation
It is true that many entertainers have power to control the society. That's why they are blamed if they do some crazy things. Like this, sports stars, especially football stars have big power to control people and society. If we think about them, we can say that they are under the FIFA because they are all football players. Now, let's see what FIFA aim to do for society. According to Joseph S. Blatter who is the head of FIFA, said that "FIFA’s primary objective is to improve the game of football constantly and promote it globally in the light of its unifying, educational, cultural and humanitarian values, particularly through youth and development programmes." Also, he said that "Football is much more than just a game. Its universal appeal means it has a unique power and reach which must be managed carefully. We believe that we have a duty to society that goes beyond football: to improve the lives of young people and their surrounding communities, to reduce the negative impact of our activities and to make the most we can of the positives.
Football can inspire communities and break down barriers. Football is for all. FIFA believes that everybody has the right to play football free from discrimination or prejudice and we are striving to ensure that this is the case.
We recognise, and work hard to limit, our impact on the environment, inspiring greater awareness and best practice in sustainability standards at all of our events.
This is the third crucial pillar of FIFA’s mission: building a better future for all through football."
Through this speech, we can notice what football players think about the society. By these concepts, football players are giving good impacts to the society. For example, FIFA is now conducting a campaing named "Football for the planet"(http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/socialresponsibility/footballforplanet/index.html) and many players are encourage this campaign through their SNS account. This is undoubtedly desirable situation and impacts.
Also, we can think about health problem. In FIFA hompage, they said that "Health is key to development and growth. Developing countries have to fight poverty, hunger and infections, but also diseases that proliferate with increasing prosperity."(http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/footballdevelopment/medical/footballforhealth/) This means they are trying to make people in the whold world helthier. This can be also good impact.
Lastly, football can make peaceful world. See this article. "The Pope met the Interreligious Match for Peace’s stars at the Vatican ahead of the game, where the teams were present with their captains Javier Zanetti and Roberto Baggio. “Use this match to say no to all forms of discrimination,” the pontiff urged. (http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/socialresponsibility/news/newsid=2435366/index.html) As you can see, FIFA is struggling to mkae world peaceful by eliminate many negative factors in the world. I think racism can be the best example. To add recism part, Tyoko Sexwale who was the manager of 2010 South Africa world cup, said that “Racism-discrimination is a society problem, and it’s like a monster that is trying now to infiltrate sporting fields. If we don’t stand up, if we allow racism to overpower sport, we will be doomed to existence in a hostile world.” in the weekly FIFA. (http://www.fifa.com/aboutfifa/socialresponsibility/news/newsid=2456567/index.html)
Trough these things, it is sure that world can reach to the peace by football with FIFA.
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