I think I deserve 2 points.
2) What did you do well?
I think my usage of interview resources was good and my arguments were not bad.
3) What could you have done better?
I think my narration and arguments with health should be better. My reasons were not that strong.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
tolerance and diversity parts.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
Health part.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I think I have to do research more and make my arguments stronger than my first draft about health part. Also I need to add narration part.
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